Questions about example sentences with, and the definition and usage of "Responsibilities"

A: your way is still correct though! So either way is okay but simple is more common :)

A: × - Refactored a bunch of legacy code
✓ -Extensive experience in refactoring of legacy code


× Expectations:
✓
Career Objectives:

× 2. Long-lasting young project
✓ 2. Long-term and early stage projects

× 3. A lot of English
✓ 3. Exposure to English-speaking environments

A: × It's because emojis don't convey our feelings properly as they should be delivered.
✓ It's because emojis don't convey our feelings as properly as they should be delivered.

× Today I would like to digress another similar topic.
✓ Today I would like to digress to another similar topic.

× Sometimes when I see posts or videos on social media; I rethink about thumbing up these posts and videos especially when they contain nudity or dirty speech even though they are made for fun.
✓ Sometimes, when I see posts or videos on social media; I hesitate thumbing them up especially when they contain nudity or dirty speech, even though they are made for fun.

× I also don't do that when I see a negative post about a public figure that I have suspicions about the real he is.
✓ I also don't do it when I see a negative post about a public figure and I have suspicions that they don't really know what that person is like in real life.

× In general, I feel that I have responsibility about being part of publishing or spreading something that might affect others life whatever the impact proportion.
✓ In general, I feel that I have a responsibility of not being part of publishing or spreading something that might affect others' lives, however small or big the impact.

A: I meant to press "a little unnatural". The first two are good, but creativity is pronounced differently.