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Q: ‎I'd be grateful if you could check my satire below. This is a type of ‘Non-Divine Comedy.’ 

A Song of a Marine’s Odyssey: Adorned with Blooms

In my life as a Marine,
the names of the sweet flowers I’ve passed through,
the names of the grass I've trampled on,
the names of the bitter fruits I've tasted,
the names of the trees I've brushed out,
are Dandelion, Basil, DevilMayCryFlower, (DevilFlower, MayFlower, CryFlower,) DMC Cross-Stitch Flower, Flour, Beatrice Rose, Rosemary, Chickweed, Water Pimpernel, Clethra, Poincetia, Mexican Fire-Plant, Paphiopedilum, Tumbleweed, Deodar Cedar, Palm Tree, Hoa Sen, Baobab, Screw Pine, Apple Grenade (M67), Friendly Fire, Pomegranate, Fig, Akebi, Biwa, Yellow Catalpa, Mayumi, Tsukiyumi, Raphèl, Maì, Amècche, Zabì, Almi, Telomere, Caina, and Antenora.
Fortunately, I've never encountered the boss 'plant' frozen in Cocytus; he’s not thawed yet, for now.
это звучит нормально?
A: × In my way of life as a marine,
✓ In my way of life as a Marine,

× are Dandelion, Basil, DevilMayCryFlower, (DevilFlower, MayFlower, CryFlower,) DMC Cross Stitch Flower, Flour, Beatrice Rose, Rosemary, Chickweed, Water Pimpernel, Clethra, Poincetia, Mexican Fire-Plant, Paphiopedilum, Tumbleweed, Deodar Cedar, Palm Tree, Baobab, Screw Pine, Apple Grenade (M67), Pomegranate, Fig, Akebi, Ume (Bury), Mayumi, Tsukiyumi, Raphèl, Maì, Amècche, Zabì, Almi, Telomere, Caina, and Antenora.
✓ are Dandelion, Basil, DevilMayCryFlower, (DevilFlower, MayFlower, CryFlower,) DMC Cross Stitch Flower, Flour, Beatrice Rose, Rosemary, Chickweed, Water Pimpernel, Clethra, Poincetia, Mexican Fire-Plant, Paphiopedilum, Tumbleweed, Deodar Cedar, Palm Tree, Baobab, Screw Pine, Apple Grenade (M67), Pomegranate, Fig, Akebi, Ume, Mayumi, Tsukiyumi, Raphèl, Maì, Amècche, Zabì, Almi, Telomere, Caina, and Antenora.

Oh this one is interesting! From the things like, Apple Grenade (M67), marine, and Cocytus I have a sense that this poem has something to do with postwar reflection and death. There's a element of humor in the listing of “plants”. In English, we call this style a “Shopping List” and it's a way to create humorous contrast — being playful along with serious topics.

The reference to Cocytus and Nimrod's line from Dante's Inferno is the most interesting. Does Yasuo Irisawa reference these things too, or did you add those references?

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Capitalization would be a good consideration to this poem! Capitalizing “Marine” here would indicate quickly to a english reader that you mean a “Navy Marine”. Lowercase “marine” in the context of poetry could mean “marine life” or ... initially made me think you meant “marina” instead of “marine”.

Capitalization is another way to use humor to your advantage. I see which plants are actual plants in the list. Just wanted to note another thing -- that in other styles English poetry, we also use capitalization to indicate and item vs. a person.

For example, capitalizing the “B” in “Basil” can suggest to a reader that it can be basil the plant or a person named Basil. In the context of your poem it could suggest that he killed or ate a person named Basil but also … simply, ate … the plant basil. www. But I know you don't want to do that, I'm just trying to give a relevant example 😂

Capitalization in native poetry is also a way that we regard things like the Sun, Stars, or Plants as living beings.

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Doing something like:

「pomegranate, fig, akebi, ume, Mayumi, Tsukiyumi, Raphèl, Maì, Amècche, Zabì, Almi, Telomere, Caina, and Antenora.」

visually contrasts the actual "plants" from the literary references. It's a way to give the readers context that these things are different from the others. Without having to write an authors note!

It's a way some poets like to create a picture with just words. So something to consider! But of course, that is up to personal preference, so completely up to you.

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What did you mean by Ume (Bury)? I understand Ume as a plant, 干し梅 is a favorite childhood snack of mine. The (Bury) suggests to me ... that the plant was buried? Like a grave? Not sure what you meant!

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