Agree or disagree: Japan should play a more active military role in the world affairs.
I do not agree with this idea for the following two reasons.

First, to play an active military role in the world, Japan should amend the Constitution to let self-defense force to act. For example, when the SDF dispatched Persian Gulf in 1991, many people criticize the activity. Since SDF in Japan have many restrictions for combat actions in the constitution, they should not engage in battles spontaneously. Although the current world affairs are becoming darker and darker, Japan should obey the constitution in order not to repeat its history.

Second, Japan’s military power should exercise for the sake of humanity, thus it should not be used as military use. Nowadays, there is a growing demand of peaceful works to eliminate war in the world. Some argue that the military power used only for humanity reasons. The power they have should not use for destroying, should use for helping people.

In conclusion, I believe that Japan should not play a more active role in the world affairs. Japan should keep its position, just for supporting to rescue people. Japan should not get involved in combat actions anymore.
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