Topic
Do you think good sportsmanship is more important than Winning?
Would you please correct the following English composition on this topic?
It is more important to have good sportsmanship than winning to do fair play. I will present concern making achievements and rewards of victory.First, to become stronger player and team , they should improve their mistakes and weak points . For example , they decide more than one goals and they think how they can achieve goals and practice hard to make achievements, then they will have confidence and they will be stronger physically and even mentally. It they think only winning , they wll not improve their mental. Second,they can get praise from audience. If they do fair play with sportsmanship, audience watch the game with comfortably. Those who think winning may cheat for others to get rewards of victory. By doing so, audience feel uncomfortable and may complain to that person and team . Therefore it is more necessary to have good sportsmanship than winning.