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"We visited Upopoy(National Ainu Museum and Park) in the evening to see the drone light show performed by illuminated, synchronized, and choreographed 300 drones. I was excited to watch they arranged themselves into various aerial formations like animals. I especially liked when they arranged themselves into the form of "Blakiston's fish owl " which is regarded one of the most important Kamuy（a spiritual or divine being in Ainu mythology）. The 7 minutes show was really cool. It went by so fast.

The illumination and the light up of Chise(Ainu's traditional house) were also
beautiful. We have an annual pass so we are regular of this museum. That enables us to enjoy it in many ways and we can visit it whenever it holds interesting events. No matter how many times I visit it, I never get tired of it."

@cisca This is better...

"We visited Upopoy (National Ainu Museum and Park) in the evening to see the drone light show performed by 300 illuminated, synchronized, and choreographed drones.

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I was excited to watch as they arranged themselves into various aerial formations like animals. I especially liked when they arranged themselves into the form of "Blakiston's fish owl " which is regarded as one of the most important Kamuy (a spiritual or divine being in Ainu mythology). The 7 minutes show was really cool. It went by so fast.

The illumination and display of Chise (Ainu's traditional house) were also beautiful. We have an annual pass so we are regulars at this museum. That enables us to enjoy it in many ways and we can visit whenever it holds interesting events. No matter how many times I visit, I never get tired of it."