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This is academic email for my professor in last two paragraphs
Please check grammar and sentence structure
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In the future, I hope to graduate from this school, and I want to transfer to the UCLA. However, I am not sure about that. This is due to the tuition and my age. My major was Communication in my previous college, on the other hand, now I'm studying business administration. Last year, I did an internship at a company which I wanted to walk for. I felt something differences from my dream. That is why I changed my dream. Now I do not have any other dream, so I would like to broaden my horizons and find my dream.
Thank you for reading about my life. Once again thank you helped me, even though I changed my class suddenly.
Sincerely,
Sunny
This is academic email for my professor in last two paragraphs
Please check grammar and sentence structure
.
.
.
In the future, I hope to graduate from this school, and I want to transfer to the UCLA. However, I am not sure about that. This is due to the tuition and my age. My major was Communication in my previous college, on the other hand, now I'm studying business administration. Last year, I did an internship at a company which I wanted to walk for. I felt something differences from my dream. That is why I changed my dream. Now I do not have any other dream, so I would like to broaden my horizons and find my dream.
Thank you for reading about my life. Once again thank you helped me, even though I changed my class suddenly.
Sincerely,
Sunny
Please check grammar and sentence structure
.
.
.
In the future, I hope to graduate from this school, and I want to transfer to the UCLA. However, I am not sure about that. This is due to the tuition and my age. My major was Communication in my previous college, on the other hand, now I'm studying business administration. Last year, I did an internship at a company which I wanted to walk for. I felt something differences from my dream. That is why I changed my dream. Now I do not have any other dream, so I would like to broaden my horizons and find my dream.
Thank you for reading about my life. Once again thank you helped me, even though I changed my class suddenly.
Sincerely,
Sunny
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- Английский (американский вариант)
To make it sound better you could write "In the future, I hope to graduate from this school, and then transfer to UCLA. However, I am not sure about that anymore. This is due to the tutition costs and my age. My major wa Communication at my previous college, now I am studying business administration. Last year I did an internship at a company which i wanted to work for. I felt some differences from my dream. That is why I changed my dream. Now I do not have any other dreams, so I would like to broaden my horizons and find my dream.
Thank you for reading about my life, as well as helping me, eventhough I changed my class suddenly.
Sincerely,
Sunny"
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- Английский (американский вариант)
To make it sound better you could write "In the future, I hope to graduate from this school, and then transfer to UCLA. However, I am not sure about that anymore. This is due to the tutition costs and my age. My major wa Communication at my previous college, now I am studying business administration. Last year I did an internship at a company which i wanted to work for. I felt some differences from my dream. That is why I changed my dream. Now I do not have any other dreams, so I would like to broaden my horizons and find my dream.
Thank you for reading about my life, as well as helping me, eventhough I changed my class suddenly.
Sincerely,
Sunny"
I hope this helps n.n
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- Английский (американский вариант)
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In the future, I hope to graduate from this school and transfer to UCLA. However, I am not sure about that. This is due to the tuition and my age. My major was Communication in my previous college but now I'm studying business administration. Last year, I did an internship at a company which I wanted to walk for. I then came to a realization that my dream was different from what I thought it would be. That is why I changed my dream. Now, I do not have any other asipiration, so I would like to broaden my horizons and find my dream.
Thank you for reading about my life. Once again, thank you for helping me despite changing my class so suddenly.
Sincerely,
Sunny
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I wanted to walk for walk -> work
Once again thank you (for) helped (helping) me,
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