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- Японский
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Английский (американский вариант)
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Английский (британский вариант)
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I think that other devices should be invented to help people with their household chores.
In Japan, the population is decreasing more and more, so we will have to work and we have no time to do the household chores in the future even if women and elderly people.
so we need devices which help our household chores. это звучит нормально?
I think that other devices should be invented to help people with their household chores.
In Japan, the population is decreasing more and more, so we will have to work and we have no time to do the household chores in the future even if women and elderly people.
so we need devices which help our household chores. это звучит нормально?
In Japan, the population is decreasing more and more, so we will have to work and we have no time to do the household chores in the future even if women and elderly people.
so we need devices which help our household chores. это звучит нормально?
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29 дек. 2017
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- Английский (американский вариант)
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1) I would use the word “more” devices instead of “other” devices.
2) I would simplify by stating the facts:
“The Japanese population has been steadily decreasing over the past 2 decades. As a result, the working class will be required to work even longer hours. Therefore, advances in home automation will be needed to support the effects on Japan’s shrinking population
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- Английский (британский вариант)
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so we would have to work and have no for household chores in the future even if women and elderly people(I guess you missed to write the rest of the sentence here, maybe "were staying at home")
so we need devices to help us with the household chores
I hope this helps!
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I think there should be an invention to help people with housework. In Japan, population is declining, even women and the elderly have to work, and they have no time to do housework.
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Я не понял о чем речь
@yukipika
Wait... what? What do you mean the population is decreasing?
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- Английский (американский вариант)
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instead of 'other' you could be more specific (new/more devices).
2nd sentence 'even if women and elderly ppl' lacks a verb. what about women and elderly are you trying to say? (what are they doing?)
the general meaning is understandable, but its a little unclear
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1) I would use the word “more” devices instead of “other” devices.
2) I would simplify by stating the facts:
“The Japanese population has been steadily decreasing over the past 2 decades. As a result, the working class will be required to work even longer hours. Therefore, advances in home automation will be needed to support the effects on Japan’s shrinking population
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