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priestgump

24 марта 2018

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"After graduating this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there. So I want to make good relationships with them through my English ability." это звучит нормально?

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Albatroazstar

24 марта 2018

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Just a couple corrections:
After graduating from this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there and I want to make good relationships with them using my English ability.

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Albatroazstar

24 марта 2018

Английский (американский вариант)

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Just a couple corrections:
After graduating from this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there and I want to make good relationships with them using my English ability.

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eggyeggbun

24 марта 2018

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After graduating, I'm returning to my hometown. I hope to build strong relationships with the many international people who are living there, using English as a tool.

AweSteer

24 марта 2018

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Great start. How about this:

After graduating this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there. So I want to meet a lot of people and strike up friendships with them using my English skills.

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priestgump

24 марта 2018

Корейский

Thank you for answering~^^

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"After graduating this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there. So I want to make good relationships with them through my English ability." это звучит нормально?

Just a couple corrections:After graduating from this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there and I want to make good relationships with them using my English ability.

Just a couple corrections:After graduating from this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there and I want to make good relationships with them using my English ability.

After graduating, I'm returning to my hometown. I hope to build strong relationships with the many international people who are living there, using English as a tool.

Great start. How about this:After graduating this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there. So I want to meet a lot of people and strike up friendships with them using my English skills.

Just a couple corrections:
After graduating from this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there and I want to make good relationships with them using my English ability.

Just a couple corrections:
After graduating from this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there and I want to make good relationships with them using my English ability.

Great start. How about this:

After graduating this academy, I'm going to go to my hometown. There are many international people there. So I want to meet a lot of people and strike up friendships with them using my English skills.